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Posted: 2009-12-20 07:17:27 Post subject: 心跳

花是大地的心跳跳得优美跳得只剩下青春起伏不定的衣衫仿佛风谲诡的手扇非要把春天的温馨煸到太阳的背面　一株稚嫩的桃花也许心跳加剧一只苍蝇掠过瞬间从都市的枝头跌落！石板把它撞出血来明媚的中午在我瞳孔里像黄昏的坠落和呜咽！　是花注定心跳一些花的心跳依旧敲响它们体内的暮钟那香凄的声音又把我招唤而来我是怀揣阳光的路人我也心跳跳得像蜜蜂咬死苍蝇含泪吊唁！ _________________ 为人总根于心，创作总根于情。 473000河南省南阳市农业银行合规办事处（伏牛路18号）

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Posted: 2009-12-20 22:54:42 Post subject: 回复

不太贴切的比喻会失去比喻的魅力！苛求诗意会谈却诗的美丽...... 问好！

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