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李三郎(李盈枝)歪传
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 21:55:00    Post subject: 李三郎(李盈枝)歪传 Reply with quote
唐李三郎称玄宗,今李三郎是我师傅..........的平方.

今李三郎居鲁地, 身边不见杨玉环.
清晨追着油条咬, 夜晚拥随电脑眠.
侃侃揶揄催泪淌, 循循善诱晕屁颠.
一坛老酒诗书酿, 扑鼻醇香古韵潭.

扔砖吧! 有恩报恩,有仇抱头.
无恩无仇者,抱大腿可矣.
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 21:59:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
君遥 wrote:
唐李三郎称玄宗,今李三郎是我师傅..........的平方.
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哈哈，发到这里来了。打油诗一般是斗智逗趣。轻松一刻值千金。还需要进一步润色。
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李盈枝
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 22:00:38    Post subject: Reply with quote
修改好了后，可以发到“开心一笑”栏目，我多半时间在那里。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-20 22:06:42    Post subject: Reply with quote
李盈枝 wrote:
修改好了后，可以发到“开心一笑”栏目，我多半时间在那里。


我不知到要改哪,能说白一点吗?
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