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移动,移动(组诗)
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 04:05:14    Post subject: 移动,移动(组诗) Reply with quote

《移动,移动》
  
  我想移动,找到那个人
  那些梦,那些影像。它们在远处
  守望,不肯为我提供方位
  
  每天都想你,念你。移动几次
  或多次。甚至打进黑夜内部
  这一枕相思要移动
  这满腹心事要移动
  这压抑的泪、淤滞的血与乡愁
  要移动,移动
  一切都是静的,除了那些言语
  
  感谢把移动创成品牌的人
  让声音移动时空
  和亲密
  还潜入流水深处,穿上迷人马甲
  那么多名字闪亮登场。被爱的那一个
  只是你
  
  《听听你的声音》
  
  摁下按键,它冰凉的唇
  一直挡着风口
  
  我需要放出铃声
  放出,低语、温柔和慌张
  等待你那声问语,破获
  距离的密码
  
  赐一缕暗香,让我倾听
  让我陷落。冷美人,只在远方摇曳
  多情的眸
  
  从你的声音抽出春天
  青鸟抖翅,花朵发出清脆的
  鸣啼
  亲爱的,你看
  我已被染成粉色
  
  《3G开花》
  
  妹妹,之前多么虚拟
  你藏在我的诗里,用古典美蒙蔽我
  暂且说蒙蔽
  
  而现在
  真有这么一面魔镜,能触摸远方
  妹妹,请用琴声唤我
  让我靠近你的孤独
  
  妹妹,细腰粉脸的妹妹
  请原谅我这么
  近距离看你。这样,我才能从唐朝
  回到一朵花里
  
  无法抵抗你,从花朵里沉淀的
  红,或手指的莹白
  关闭了这么久
  我真的,想再开放一次

《远远的街灯亮了》

街灯站成一行,寂寞得
让人变旧。它身上有惊艳的火花
一拉,曾擦亮那么多绝望

它现在患上相思
喜欢被移动手机遥控,梦在声音之外
与一条短信呼应,夜被打开

远远的街灯亮了
像一朵朵幸福的黄菊,松开
攥紧的拳头

《飞信》

飞信是一只蝴蝶。它从指尖上
走失。无限量扩张翅膀,与一万朵花儿
交换过秘语

它眸子的闪电,挂满了
随意标签。天衣无缝。随时随地
掏出我的惊喜,片刻不离

此刻,它拉长风的耳朵
从一节移动的车厢
走进家门。走进父亲的白发
母亲的皱纹

兄弟,姊妹,你们也被
加入我的飞信队伍,蝴蝶经过这里
会带走绵延的乡思

《装在口袋里的邮箱》

126不是,136不是
那些电子邮箱都不是。它们在网上走红
习惯拒人千里

移动的花儿开了,高于春天的
视线。139,有足够的红。让你准时
抵达我。并成为流行中心

把你装在口袋里
你小鸟依人,贴近我的胸口
可以随手拿起你
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PostPosted: 2009-12-08 18:57:09    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very Happy 红红, 你真要迷死白水大帅哥 Very Happy Very Happy

不好意思,开了个玩笑。诗歌写的清新,真情,自然。喜欢。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-10 22:38:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

信手开花,都不错
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PostPosted: 2009-12-11 07:44:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

那么多名字闪亮登场。被爱的那一个
  只是你


移动,移动。这移动带来的网络也有好处,可产生这么一组漂亮的诗~
你是在给移动打广告吗?他们该付你宣传费~ Very Happy
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PostPosted: 2009-12-12 08:40:28    Post subject: Reply with quote

白水 Moonlight wrote:
Very Happy 红红, 你真要迷死白水大帅哥 Very Happy Very Happy
...

嘻嘻,白白姊妹要是大帅哥,红红就是大酷哥 Laughing Laughing Laughing
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PostPosted: 2009-12-12 08:42:31    Post subject: Reply with quote

hepingdao wrote:
信手开花,都不错

问好和平岛,嘻嘻,随手开花。握握~
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PostPosted: 2009-12-12 08:44:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
那么多名字闪亮登场。被爱的那一个
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嘻嘻,明月好。就是移动应该付宣传费,我这找他们去。
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PostPosted: 2009-12-12 23:17:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

信手开花,都不错
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PostPosted: 2009-12-13 06:58:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

无处不移动啊。但诗人是在移形换物
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PostPosted: 2010-01-02 07:59:47    Post subject: Reply with quote

无处不移动啊。但诗人是在移形换物
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