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哭兄[调寄蝶恋花]

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Posted: 2009-12-02 18:45:50 Post subject: 哭兄[调寄蝶恋花]

蝶恋花哭兄记得当年亲嫁妹，图妹欢欣，喜置鸳鸯被。东凑西拼全大体，剪花绣朵心何细。没有爹娘兄受累，一饭一纱，出自十来岁。待要报恩无处觅，坟山抓遍空垂泪。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2009-12-02 18:58:28 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

蝶恋花
哭兄

记得当年亲嫁妹，
图妹欢欣，喜置鸳鸯被。
东凑西拼全大体，
剪花绣朵心何细。

没有爹娘兄受累，
一饭一纱，出自十来岁。
待要报恩无处觅，
坟山抓遍空垂泪。

难得一见的好词，感人至深，催人泪下。

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Posted: 2009-12-02 19:29:44 Post subject:

谢谢李兄过奖，老弟我仍须努力。 _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2009-12-02 19:49:39 Post subject:

悼兄词写得细腻生动感人,同哀同悼. "抓"字可能敲错了字,是否为"找". _________________ ++++++++++++++ 喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰

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Posted: 2009-12-02 22:57:35 Post subject:

兄妹情深。但诗友自称老弟，究竟是兄妹还是兄弟？

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Posted: 2009-12-03 01:31:22 Post subject:

qinghongh wrote:

兄妹情深。但诗友自称老弟，究竟是兄妹还是兄弟？

所以我把回复修改了，去掉了“同悼”、“节哀”的字眼。

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Posted: 2009-12-03 01:43:35 Post subject:

李先生果然细心。去世的是我的内兄，我是从布荆的角度去追思的。谢谢您关切之诚！ _________________ 学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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Posted: 2009-12-03 01:46:37 Post subject:

君山楚女 wrote:

李先生果然细心。去世的是我的内兄，我是从布荆的角度去追思的。谢谢您关切之诚！

我写了大量的女性题材诗词曲，结果把照片贴出来，人家也不相信我是男的，以为照片是假的。

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Posted: 2009-12-03 01:54:05 Post subject:

黄洋界 wrote:

悼兄词写得细腻生动感人,同哀同悼.
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黄先生：我这里是一个“抓”字。贱妻送灵柩上山，一路上哭得天昏地暗，下山时怎么也拖不走，手抓黄土不肯放，要想报恩难上难。我一狠心，叫两个大力士把她生拉硬扯拖回家的。哥哥十二岁，她三岁，带大出嫁真不容易。
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学习的敌人是自己的满足，要认真学习一点东西，必须从不自满开始。——毛泽东

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