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退休了,我更年轻
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PostPosted: 2009-11-26 20:26:52    Post subject: 退休了,我更年轻 Reply with quote

退休了,我更年轻

退休
一端系着45年工龄
一端系着未来风月人情
他是终点
也是起点
如长江奔流不息
站在这个高岸
我不会沉默
因为我年轻
我还行

不要去追问
长江的源头在哪里
长江没功夫回答
他要昂起头
追赶时代潮
关于过去的事
请留给学究
赋之笔底
长江自有他的人生哲理
纵然千曲百折
不把头回

退休
还是喝的长江水
生母的乳汗和巴掌
锻造出这个性子
象六月的荷叶
揉碎了还有
清香无比

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PostPosted: 2009-11-27 06:34:51    Post subject: 问好 Reply with quote

南京去过,几次玄武湖畔巡看。明城墙的巍峨,玄武湖的阔野。开始还坐城铁,后来才知火车站边上的捷径。您已经工龄45年,我才30年。您有青春豪情,我积极向您学习。简单问个好,希望常见面。
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PostPosted: 2009-11-27 09:48:05    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗心不老~
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PostPosted: 2009-11-27 16:43:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

半溪明月 wrote:
诗心不老~


谢谢半溪明月照我行!
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PostPosted: 2009-11-27 16:45:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

雨中垂钓人 wrote:
南京去过,几次玄武湖畔巡看。明城墙的巍峨,玄武湖的阔野。开始还坐城铁,后来才知火车站边上的捷径。您已经工龄45年,我才30年。您有青春豪情,我积极向您学习。简单问个好,希望常见面。


乐交忘年友,共向李杜学。
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PostPosted: 2009-11-27 23:10:55    Post subject: Reply with quote

清新,流畅,亲切。
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