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童年的回忆（组诗七首）

舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2008-06-14 21:22:23 Post subject: 童年的回忆（组诗七首）

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舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2008-06-15 20:44:43 Post subject:

自提一下

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Posted: 2008-06-15 21:13:51 Post subject:

颀赏打架/炸肉/鸡蛋这三首,形象,灵动.句子也炼得好. _________________ 秀水：省青协会员.在《星星诗刊》《绿风》《诗选刊》《常青藤诗刊》等发表诗歌散文二百余篇。兼写童话。邮箱xshx100@163.com 秀水博客http://blog.sina.com.cn/feizoudeshui

爱义多
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Posted: 2008-06-16 16:19:09 Post subject:

词语很有个性啊，加油：）

舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2008-06-17 03:48:26 Post subject:

秀水 wrote:

颀赏打架/炸肉/鸡蛋这三首,形象,灵动.句子也炼得好.

谢谢秀水的评阅和鼓励
问好

刘坤军
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Posted: 2008-06-17 04:04:56 Post subject:

简练的语句！问好！ _________________ 刘坤军：http://blog.sina.com.cn/liukunjun

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Posted: 2008-06-17 21:19:30 Post subject:

爱义多 wrote:

词语很有个性啊，加油：）

谢谢爱义多来读
问好

风度飘飘
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Posted: 2008-06-17 21:30:33 Post subject:

呵呵，很有趣 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/fdpp

舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2008-06-19 21:05:40 Post subject:

刘坤军 wrote:

简练的语句！问好！

谢谢坤军兄弟的评阅和鼓励
问好

hepingdao
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Posted: 2008-06-19 21:11:23 Post subject:

短而生动有味 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2008-06-22 21:32:17 Post subject:

风度飘飘 wrote:

呵呵，很有趣

谢谢兄弟来读
问候

舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2008-06-24 00:28:39 Post subject:

hepingdao wrote:

短而生动有味

谢谢兄弟的鼓励
问好

晴宝儿
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Posted: 2008-06-28 21:43:18 Post subject:

多生动的童年记忆啊，问好！ _________________ 晴宝儿

舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2008-07-04 03:51:49 Post subject:

晴宝儿 wrote:

多生动的童年记忆啊，问好！

谢谢宝儿的评阅和鼓励
问好

舒展的波浪
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Posted: 2009-11-27 00:18:21 Post subject:

一路谢谢大家

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