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冬夜，窗外野苇

俞伟远
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Joined: 02 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2009-11-19 20:47:31 Post subject: 冬夜，窗外野苇

冬夜，窗外野苇那是野苇的声音唰啦唰啦晃动夜的黑像是一些朋友在不远处酒后的言语可以肯定，不是快乐的它们的话语与室内暖色灯光无关现在它们无法不慌不忙无法悠扬抓不住属于自己的片刻冥想夏天搬家到这里它们青春的模样葱郁在目光里秋天，它们幸福地开出苇絮无论凉的或暖的风抒情地摇摆窗外，多么黑见不着它们挣扎的姿态不能提供援助的手不知该说怎样安慰的话冷风里，炽烈的声音柔软着我的血管血，渐渐合着节奏流动 2009-11-17深夜 2009-11-20 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

安红红
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Posted: 2009-11-19 20:56:25 Post subject:

要表达的意境挺不错的~~第一二段起笔挺好~~感觉还没写到位~~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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