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南国杜鹃
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Posted: 2009-11-14 04:33:10 Post subject: 与乞者说

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nightingale2
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Posted: 2009-11-17 11:34:21 Post subject:

最后几句很有味道，其他的叙述性语气词太多，没有诗意

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