宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2009-10-31 20:43:03 Post subject: 七律•菊花吟 |
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七律•菊花吟(平水韵)
文/宁家珍
凝露衔霜不畏摧,孤标独爱向秋开。
香魂一缕径前漫,傲影千层篱下堆。
无意黄花明斗艳,多情墨客暗争魁。
欲寻陶令同吟句,坐享良辰共酒杯。
陶令:陶渊明,又名陶潜。因其做过彭泽县令,故称之。
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又一方天 秀才

Joined: 16 Nov 2006 Posts: 385
又一方天Collection |
Posted: 2009-11-07 20:20:47 Post subject: |
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香魂一缕径前漫,傲影千层篱下堆。 ----欣赏 _________________ 空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2009-11-08 10:36:50 Post subject: To 又一方天 |
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谢谢欣赏,问候老师。 |
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兰畹明月 童生
Joined: 12 Nov 2009 Posts: 5
兰畹明月Collection |
Posted: 2009-11-12 01:37:53 Post subject: |
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诗不错!
只是一傲字又着一堆字,似乎不太搭配。一孔愚见,恕罪。 |
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米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2009-11-12 03:43:19 Post subject: |
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“欲寻陶令同吟句,坐享良辰共酒杯。”闲适,雅致。欣赏! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2009-11-20 21:30:42 Post subject: To 米运刚先生等文友 |
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谢谢诸位文友的欣赏,一并问候大家。 |
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