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《我也说悬棺》
金沙
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 21:37:34    Post subject: 《我也说悬棺》 Reply with quote

《我也说悬棺》

金 沙


在云南寒冷的北边
石头洞里有无数悬棺
睡着死去的许多先人
中国有个诗人的凡高樊忠慰
说是:
一个死去多年的人/他想飞
而也有一个很牛的诗人
却说这个只是
先人的板板

他们两个
一个是鹰
眼睛想着天上
一个是龙
眼睛盯着地上
而我说悬棺
是童年的人类
想拽住那条
蓝天伸下来的
天堂之路
他灵魂的眼睛
一直睁着
已睁了几千年


通讯地址:
652702 云南省通海县纳古镇----新月文化工作室

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和平岛
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Location: Victoria, Canada
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 21:44:37    Post subject: Reply with quote

他灵魂的眼睛

这几个眼睛
比较特别

欢迎金沙光临!
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金沙
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PostPosted: 2007-02-21 06:47:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢和平..老师..
问好/
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PostPosted: 2007-02-21 07:09:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

后面不错,第一节可压压。
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金沙
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PostPosted: 2007-02-21 17:38:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

《我也说悬棺》

金 沙


在西南的一些山崖上
石头洞里躺着无数悬棺
睡着死去的许多先人
云南有个诗人的凡高樊忠慰
说是:
一个死去多年的人/他想飞
而云南另外一个很牛的诗人陈衍强
却说这个只是
先人的板板

他们两个
一个是鹰
眼睛想着天上
一个是龙
眼睛盯着地上

而诗魔洛夫说
他们像:
问号那样虚悬着

而我说悬棺
是童年的人类
想拽住那条
蓝天伸下来的
天堂之路
他灵魂的眼睛
一直睁着
已睁了几千年


通讯地址:
652702 云南省通海县纳古镇----新月文化工作室

金 沙
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