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[原创]献给爷爷的挽诗
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 00:32:48    Post subject: [原创]献给爷爷的挽诗 Reply with quote

1.灵前灯草

晚风拾级
一根灯草
在抽噎中枯萎
收拢一朵音容笑貌
一双沉睡的眼,和一句
未来得及嘱托的话
在夏日的黄昏里,消逝


2.锡箔元宝

风把依恋叠进元宝
一只又一只
置于锅底,阴暗
任凭火焰吞噬昔日的灿烂
燃剩一地祝愿
和祝福
捎向天国的亲人


3.哀乐 ——《真的好想你》

月色蹒跚
洗涤一张枯槁面容
阴霾里,拾一枚悲伤
拨不动生涩的琴弦

爷爷——
您听到孙女撕心地呼唤么

爷爷——
您为何走得那么匆忙
头也不回,任由虫蚁啃噬
一包“安享晚年”

揭开,流淌一地的
是亲人的哀怨与不舍


4.去天国的路上

汽车动了
载着爷爷赶往天国

爷爷,您看
亲手播种的麦苗
踮脚,探头
依恋着您

爷爷,您看
那荷花
素裳摇曳
为谁,披麻戴孝

爷爷,您看
脚下的马路
被一辆三轮车来回
磨了无数次
炎炎烈日
您载筐青菜,萝卜
来我家

爷爷,您看到了么
孙女已开门迎接
您怎还不下车
再喊一句,哪怕最后一句

“小雪,爷爷来看你了……”


5.爷爷,我不哭

爷爷——
您怎不理我
半开的嘴
含着千言万语
凋落灵柩
悄无声息

爷爷——
小雪不哭,真的不哭
掇拾亲人的泪珠
串成祈珠挂于胸前

爷爷——
您几天没吃东西了
憔悴爬满你慈祥的脸
冰冷的大手
触不到春暖花开

爷爷——
您睡了么
黑夜袭来
小雪日夜守着你
不让寒风偷走你灵前的光

冷风——
轻些啊,轻些
爷爷睡了
安静地睡了
在梦里,爷爷为我披上一件雪白的衣裳


6.爷爷,我们一起回家

一方骨灰盒
连同爷爷的欢声笑语
和对我无尽的疼爱
都深深埋在后山坡
一棵樱桃树下
等待来年花满枝桠
蝶儿蹁跹
是爷爷回来看我了

“小雪
要坚强
爷爷最不放心的就是你啊”

“爷爷——
别丢下小雪
难道您不爱小雪了么”

爷爷——
我终于等到你了
让我就这样紧紧抱着你
就像儿时你抱着我,唱山歌

爷爷——
我们一起回家


7.献给爷爷的挽诗

泪水打湿一个个欢乐音符
一只只蝌蚪游离在悲伤的街头
素衣裹不住思念的心
秋风吹不走那一地的凋零

黑套纠缠一枝万念俱灰
忘了留言
忘了如何写诗
只剩这破碎的支离
拼成一首清瘦的挽诗

(写这诗的时候,泣不成声,多次停住;每次读这诗的时候,想念我远在天国的爷爷,泪如雨下)
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 07:34:17    Post subject: Reply with quote

感人的真情

祝春节好!
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 13:55:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

确实非常感人。
真的假的看来不难分辨。
技巧也很好,让感情保持了原味。
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