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与一根木头舞蹈
孤雪
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PostPosted: 2009-11-01 00:54:46    Post subject: 与一根木头舞蹈 Reply with quote

与一根木头舞蹈
之一:
打开音乐,别再去颠覆词语
这个绿意尤存的秋天
房门紧闭。别再指望那些不成熟的预感
会给你带来温暖。叶子飞走了
你恰好中弹,这帮预谋以久的家伙
从你身体中穿来穿去,想入非非

现在,一曲探戈正被流放
来吧,我的兄弟
让我们一起,跳一支舞吧
倘若这时那只虫子正穿越你的身体
就用我们的舞姿给予回敬

这是多么快乐的时刻
脚步随着音乐起伏行进
不必小心绕过门里门外那些爬虫
尽管他们浑身缀满了历史
终究逃不出你优美的舞姿
2009.10.29
之二:
走三步,退两步
空间狭窄
你体魄坚硬,我开始怀疑
你是否来自柔软的家乡

昨夜,有人提起钥匙
哦,你是木头,适合装锁
我认定这乐曲定能拨开那些弹子
别给我装模做样了

左三步,右三步
前三步,后三步
一拉,一收,旋转,再旋转
天才的舞者

越来越柔软了,我的舞伴
开始发芽,长出翅膀
幸好此刻门窗紧闭
挽留住了这些鸟鸣和叶子的笑声
2009.10.29
之三:
跳吧,这是最后一曲
我就要化为灰烬,夹杂琐碎的白骨
你就是盛我的盒子

你很久没有发芽了
我不会放弃对绿色叶子的思念
有关五月的暧昧,眼中纷落的雨水

跳吧,这是最后一曲
窗外会有大片的林木绿起来
他们都是你的兄弟姐妹
陪着你,也陪着我
度过春夏秋冬
2009.10.29
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杨海军
进士出身


Joined: 01 Mar 2007
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Location: 吉林
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PostPosted: 2009-11-01 16:55:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。请继续!!!
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走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮
——拙作《离开村庄》
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-11-02 06:55:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

不管木头懂不懂你~~你却懂木头~~
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孤雪
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PostPosted: 2009-11-05 07:46:01    Post subject: Reply with quote

杨海军 wrote:
不错。请继续!!!

谢谢鼓励!
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孤雪
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PostPosted: 2009-11-05 07:46:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

安红红 wrote:
不管木头懂不懂你~~你却懂木头~~
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只要我懂他,他就会懂我。呵呵~~
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江南雨
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Joined: 03 Jul 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-11-05 19:31:02    Post subject: Reply with quote

不错。请继续
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孤雪
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PostPosted: 2009-11-06 10:00:23    Post subject: Reply with quote

江南雨 wrote:
不错。请继续
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谢谢!
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