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《赠某人》投稿第三期——
诗之剑
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 08:29:27    Post subject: 《赠某人》投稿第三期—— Reply with quote
《赠某人》

——诗之剑

像春天又回到了春天
你只能说一年又到了一年

当婴儿的啼哭化作一把不寒而粟的利剑
贴近你时更像一颗防不胜防的子弹

于是，恐惧搭35路中巴车从友好路到幸福路
疼痛乘波音747从丹麦到埃及

途中，车厢里有一位老人说他曾经见过一次哈雷慧星
机舱里有一位女士说她一生一共整过三次容

你迟疑，你的迟疑具有一尊人面狮的迟疑
你留意，你的留意具有一尾美人鱼的留意

说什么好呢，春天同样会在一杯米酒中来
又会同样在一杯米酒中去

奶茶的余味
晓月因你而谢绝了一杯黄昏的咖啡
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 08:39:19    Post subject: Reply with quote
赠人赠己

春节快乐!
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PostPosted: 2007-02-20 12:48:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
语言有新意诗意。很好。
好像作者没打算把故事稍微透露一下。
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