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想你
梦之
童生


Joined: 18 Aug 2009
Posts: 66
Location: 北美
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PostPosted: 2009-10-20 19:43:41    Post subject: 想你 Reply with quote

看不见时,
想你;
想你,
白昼里茶饭无味,
坐卧不宁,
无心投入任何事情;
想你,
夜里辗转反复,
思绪绵绵,
梦里、醒着脑子里总有你。

看见你时,
想你;
想你的目光,
想你的笑容,
想你那张熟悉的面孔,
想你那些习惯了的言谈举止,
音容笑貌;
甚至想你调皮时的恶作剧,
得意时的沾沾自喜。

想摘束阳光送你,
怕你嫌烫;
想摘片月光送你,
怕你嫌静;
想摘段彩霞送你,
怕你炫目;
想摘片白云送你,
怕你嫌轻;
就算送片绿洲给你,
也怕有点色彩单调。

看你失意我痛苦;
看你迷茫我担忧;
看你低落我揪心;
看你徘徊我牵挂;
在你无奈;
在你无力;
在你无助;
在你无望时;
有我,有我,总有我;
我的视野追随你,
我的内心围绕着你。
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2009-10-21 06:49:57    Post subject: Reply with quote

怕有点色彩单调.
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-10-21 08:26:53    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱到极致~~
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梦之
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PostPosted: 2009-10-21 17:28:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢赵先生的指导!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-21 17:29:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢红红的关注!
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郄智成
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Joined: 15 Oct 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-10-22 02:41:35    Post subject: Reply with quote

把情融进字里行间,不是写诗的人也能读懂。喜欢
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PostPosted: 2009-10-22 18:47:30    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢!问好!
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半溪明月
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 07:42:19    Post subject: Reply with quote

很直白的诗~
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梦之
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PostPosted: 2009-10-23 19:41:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

向半溪明月问好!请多指导!
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宇宙神龙
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Joined: 19 Oct 2009
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Location: 中国福建
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PostPosted: 2009-10-26 06:10:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

爱意绵绵,无限深情!问好品读
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PostPosted: 2009-11-02 21:05:25    Post subject: Reply with quote

想神龙问好致谢!
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