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边井
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PostPosted: 2009-10-26 22:08:02    Post subject: 《漏夜》(组诗)/边井 Reply with quote

《漏夜》(组诗)/边井

《困》


这个夜是趴着的
与车轮和狗吠无关
一条被单
能掩饰什么?

《欲破》

推半扇窗
漏进的夜色 并未能
盖住一丝寒意
数声虫鸣
灯火只在想像中
明亮。这样的夜
你看不到边

《未来》

挂花糕的香甜
撒满童年
黎明就藏在挂花深处
风一抖
有万缕香倒在地上
我倒在夜色中......
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PostPosted: 2009-10-27 06:06:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

《困》

这个夜是趴着的
与车轮和狗吠无关
一条被单
能掩饰什么?

欣赏!
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边井
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PostPosted: 2009-10-28 07:07:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

感谢老乡的认真点评与指导!:)我乐清的~
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