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争执
金川诗歌
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PostPosted: 2009-10-25 19:53:08    Post subject: 争执 Reply with quote

争执

争执发生了
无边无际的世界
突然裂成两半,很小
你的那半总在挤我
我想走人行道
你阻止我走这一侧
总逼迫我走另一侧,不为什么呵
我端起碗
你似乎迟缓我拿筷子
我要开始睡觉
你却说,且慢
睡眠被吓走了一多半
那么,我要唱歌
却被你拿走了歌调

   二○○八年十二月十八日
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PostPosted: 2009-10-26 07:56:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌要表达的意境一目了然~~不过没写到位~~过于直白了~~
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