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原创诗歌:灯笼
或云或马:贺铭
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PostPosted: 2007-02-16 06:06:59    Post subject: 原创诗歌:灯笼 Reply with quote

灯笼
或云或马
当年 我在门檐
栽下的两棵红灯笼
今年春节又开花了

老父母坐在炕头上
扳着指头算日子
窗外的大雪飘呀飘呀
积在院子里尺那么厚

热带不会下雪吧
父亲越来越像个孩子
儿子说白天还穿短袖呢
母亲的语气愈发温柔

热带的雨浇啊浇啊
一路飘摇的小舟
风帆鼓满
向北的劲风

北方的雪飘呀飘呀
老父母的目光
穿越千山万水
永远不熄的灯笼

2007.2.15

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一只乱风中的风筝
努力保持着平衡
他胆怯 他脆弱 他想摆脱
于是他不停地向上 可是
上面还是风
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2007-02-17 00:59:29    Post subject: Reply with quote

温馨动人,尤其喜欢第一节

“北方的雪飘呀飘呀
老父母的目光
穿越千山万水
永远不熄的灯笼”

送新年好
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PostPosted: 2007-02-17 16:21:16    Post subject: Reply with quote

老父母的目光
穿越千山万水
永远不熄的灯笼
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PostPosted: 2007-02-17 20:12:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢两位的理解。
诗歌需要培养读者,一起努力吧,朋友们。
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努力保持着平衡
他胆怯 他脆弱 他想摆脱
于是他不停地向上 可是
上面还是风
更乱 更强
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