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幻

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Posted: 2009-10-14 22:05:23 Post subject: 幻

幻马一直在那儿低头吃草抬头望天缰绳可有可无有缰又奈何鞭响刺耳，无法证实它在何方梦里奔驰有谁能听到马一直在那儿不哭不笑要不低头不吃草时就沉思要不抬头不想望天时就长啸马一直在那儿马渐渐变老时光从远处草原飘来慢慢抚摸马马稍犹豫，一天又过抬起马腿，不知该踩哪儿 2009-10-15 _________________ 俞伟远：１９６７生，１９８７大学毕业、工作。19９０年后几乎与诗绝缘，2006年春重拾笔，感悟生活，凝望心灵，自得其乐。http://blog.sina.com.cn/txyuweiyuan

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Joined: 08 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2009-10-15 18:17:15 Post subject:

很好啊，但是是否过于拟人啦？！！一家言。问好。。 _________________ http://blog.sina.com.cn/shirenjinjin

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