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【六丑】 人间
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PostPosted: 2009-10-11 18:05:54    Post subject: 【六丑】 人间 Reply with quote

【六丑】 人间





正西风瑟瑟,季节转、无教人觉。
叶黄草芜,疏林栖怯雀。
万籁萧寂。
恰鸭知冷暖,雁鸣鱼匿,又北天凉彻。
风清气爽纤云薄。
水旷烟袅,原荒野阔。
阴阳几番相博。
想寒来暑往,今古如一。

民为鱼鳖。
奈无情泽国。
忍看千年事,怜骨血。
凄然念此长咽。
倩春秋巨擘,力擎椽笔。
须凭任、绪飘无极。
还道是、造物风情万种,可能描得。
穷今世、上下求索。
莫到头、负了凌云志,人间过客!



【六丑】

此周邦彦创作“中吕调”曲。据周密《浩然斋雅谈》,邦彦曾对宋徽宗云:“此犯六调,皆声之美者,然绝难歌。昔高阳氏有子六人,才而丑,故以此比之。”一百四十字,前片八仄韵,后片九仄韵。例用入声部韵,诸领格字并用去声。


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仄平平仄仄,仄仄仄、平平平仄(韵)。
仄平仄平,平平平仄仄(韵)。
仄仄平仄(韵)。
仄仄平平仄,仄平平仄,仄仄平平仄(韵)。
平平仄仄平平仄(韵)。
仄仄平平,平平仄仄(韵)。
平平仄平平仄(韵)。
仄平平仄仄,平仄平仄(韵)。

平平平仄(韵)。
仄平平仄仄(韵)。
仄仄平平仄,平仄仄(韵)。
平平仄仄平仄(韵)。
仄平平仄仄,仄平平仄(韵)。
平平仄、仄平平仄(韵)。
平仄仄、仄仄平平仄仄,仄平平仄(韵)。
平平仄、仄仄平仄(韵)。
仄仄平、仄仄平平仄,平平仄仄(韵)。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 01:32:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

欣赏“还道是、造物风情万种,可能描得。”
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烟波月醉
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PostPosted: 2009-10-12 03:57:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

同感,亦念“想寒来暑往,今古如一。”问好!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-18 19:16:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢两位先进鼓励!
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PostPosted: 2009-10-19 05:51:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

忧国忧民。
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