刘献琛
童生
Joined: 03 Sep 2009
Posts: 36
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 Posted: 2009-10-04 19:25:48 Post subject: 卜算子 步飞廉词韵祝福中秋 |
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万里舞飞廉，明月西天坠。秋思绵绵寄素娥，何惜冰轮累。
潮涌大洋翻，彼岸吟游子。皓魄东来海雾开，桂酒长天醉。
附原玉；
有夢挾風迴，無月隨花墜。踏破天涯終一場，煙雪瀟湘累。
落得舞衣香，不見吾和子。此去江南十萬山，可否長相醉。 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-10-05 03:38:00 Post subject: |
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"桂酒長天醉",好句!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-10-05 16:35:02 Post subject: |
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| 唱和俱佳。欣赏！ |
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刘献琛
童生
Joined: 03 Sep 2009
Posts: 36
刘献琛Collection |
| Posted: 2009-10-06 21:33:42 Post subject: |
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谢兄高评。问好 |
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刘献琛
童生
Joined: 03 Sep 2009
Posts: 36
刘献琛Collection |
| Posted: 2009-10-06 21:34:59 Post subject: |
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谢兄雅赏。问好！ |
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又一方天
秀才
Joined: 16 Nov 2006
Posts: 385
又一方天Collection |
| Posted: 2009-10-07 16:47:17 Post subject: |
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拜读！
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空钩久垂
钓得
烟波月醉 |
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刘献琛
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Joined: 03 Sep 2009
Posts: 36
刘献琛Collection |
| Posted: 2009-10-10 19:46:28 Post subject: |
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吟兄客气，盼多指教。问好！ |
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