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三五中秋夜
绛紫湮
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PostPosted: 2009-10-05 18:57:00    Post subject: 三五中秋夜 Reply with quote
三五中秋夜

支起时光的香案
燃三注甲骨文凝聚的清香
捧一把秦砖汉瓦上的月华
一拜

舀一瓢黄河的水
对上长江的浪
沿 诗经的足迹
二拜

拈一朵花自飘零水自流的花
吟着唐诗宋词
为天有眼兮何不见我独漂流
三拜

起身
用孟姜女哭倒的长城的泥土做成的酒杯
满上昭君的眼泪酿成的酒
举杯邀月，，，，

酒醉移步难
把酒问嫦娥
可见，水中漂浮着的落寂的莲
相思不成眠
一曲红楼梦中月 为何不见玉相连

夜 透过月色的寒
远处传来的若有若无的琴音
可是蔡文姬也在拜月吟唱？
云中的月啊
你能否载动天下女儿的梦想


双手合一苍白了世界
迷惘的忧伤
羞走了月亮
从此 隔绝了世界
只是依然有那么一朵莲
在黑夜里出淤泥
默默的绽放
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PostPosted: 2009-10-06 17:50:13    Post subject: Reply with quote
对阁下那头像竟生念想：何不转眸
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2009-10-07 11:42:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
情绪很复杂。
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PostPosted: 2009-10-07 13:40:06    Post subject: Reply with quote
枯蝶 wrote:
对阁下那头像竟生念想：何不转眸


问好 ，如何转呢~
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PostPosted: 2009-10-07 13:40:57    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
情绪很复杂。
e

问好~
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PostPosted: 2009-10-09 09:17:19    Post subject: 您也安好！这里较冷清，海涵。 Reply with quote
绛紫湮 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
情绪很复杂。
e

问好~

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PostPosted: 2009-10-09 09:20:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
再三读过，真好！
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PostPosted: 2009-10-09 12:49:24    Post subject: Reply with quote
绛紫湮 wrote:
枯蝶 wrote:
对阁下那头像竟生念想：何不转眸


问好 ，如何转呢~



向前五步走
右转，向前三步跑 ；向右转
三步走，左转，向前三步跑
立正，稍息，向左看齐。
她是谁
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PostPosted: 2009-10-09 14:28:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
詩盜喜裸評 wrote:
再三读过，真好！


汗！
：）不过有诗人这样评论开心~
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PostPosted: 2009-10-11 05:45:00    Post subject: 欣赏尔，俺只是个看倌，连评论员都不够格呢。 Reply with quote
绛紫湮 wrote:
诗盗喜裸评 wrote:
再三读过，真好！


汗！
：）不过有诗人这样评论开心~

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PostPosted: 2009-10-11 11:51:43    Post subject: Reply with quote
枯蝶 wrote:
绛紫湮 wrote:
枯蝶 wrote:
对阁下那头像竟生念想：何不转眸


问好 ，如何转呢~



向前五步走
...


哎呀，还是糊涂 向前五步走？
难道是 禀神智以藏照， 秉三五而垂名 天、地、人三才 仁、义、礼、智、信五常不成？
或是，婵娟过三五， 珠翠成仇雠。 ？

我这三五是 三五月华新， 遨游逐上春~ 西西

问好 玩笑~
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PostPosted: 2009-10-15 04:37:54    Post subject: 真好，我也一拜，送好诗 Reply with quote
很喜欢。也有情，有气魄。

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