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国庆六十周年大阅兵

白云
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Posted: 2009-10-01 07:25:53 Post subject: 国庆六十周年大阅兵

联题国庆六十周年大阅兵强阵起龙吟，声震长城内外；高台开虎目，静观世界风云。七绝/国庆六十周年大阅兵国庆欢歌动北京，天安门上阅精兵；红旗漫舞雄鹰啸，迎得中秋月更明。 _________________ http://jianghai97.blog.163.com/

William Zhou周道模
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Joined: 10 Jun 2007
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Posted: 2009-10-02 12:49:23 Post subject:

抒豪情华夏同庆可贺！论诗艺此题难写特色难出。 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

秋叶
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Joined: 17 Feb 2007
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Posted: 2009-10-02 13:54:38 Post subject:

白云 wrote:

联题国庆六十周年大阅兵
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当天我也在网上看了，白云兄高度概括。中秋快乐！

白云
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Joined: 22 Apr 2008
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Posted: 2009-10-03 18:38:00 Post subject:

问好周道模先生、秋叶先生！谢谢顶帖，国庆中秋双节气氛热烈，不亚于春节，祝两位也过得愉快！ _________________ http://jianghai97.blog.163.com/

米运刚
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Posted: 2009-10-04 00:39:49 Post subject:

对联有气势。“吟”与“目”，“声”与“静”的词性是否还可斟酌？问好，白云先生！

白云
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Posted: 2009-10-06 05:45:59 Post subject:

问好米运刚先生！我个人理解，“虎目”/“龙吟”整体是名词性，可以相对。声震/静观，这个是不太工整，只是于联意而为，谢谢点评。 _________________ http://jianghai97.blog.163.com/

又一方天
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Posted: 2009-10-07 16:52:08 Post subject:

人心振奋之歌。 _________________ 空钩久垂钓得烟波月醉

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