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莲花

lingquan.yang
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Posted: 2009-10-07 16:15:14 Post subject: 莲花

开一朵铁的莲花在盾上在戈上在矛上在剑上在镞上在钢铁的方阵上铁的莲花都会锈蚀化为土啊就开一朵风的莲花在花上在云上在泉上在鸟的啼声里开在杜鹃的啼血里开一朵在竹叶上开一朵在锦书上开一朵在卷册里开一朵在死者的骸骨上就用竹叶锦书卷册死者的骸骨做养料开一朵永不会锈蚀的莲花在我的身体上吧用我的血肉灵命做养料开啊，有两个大海涌出我的眼眶总也看不见莲花开在铁里永不锈蚀呀 2008.5.13 _________________ 走在历险的途中

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Posted: 2009-10-07 19:47:50 Post subject:

铿锵而急促，这种气息很迷人~

韩少君
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Posted: 2009-10-07 21:53:36 Post subject:

欣赏这一首！感觉切入的独特！ _________________ 靠才华为自己带来幸福的是才子;靠才华为自己带来痛苦的是诗人!!http://blog.sina.com.cn/hanshaojun345

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