君山楚女
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Joined: 09 Sep 2008
Posts: 333
Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
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 Posted: 2009-11-21 16:06:49 Post subject: 作嵌名五言赠淡月浅荷网友 |
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作嵌名五言赠淡月浅荷网友
幽岸银辉淡,
月华玉露寒;
花阴轻复浅,
荷影动晨岚。
灵感源于朱自清《荷塘月色》。
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白云闲人
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Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-11-21 20:33:51 Post subject: |
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嵌得妙! 诗旖旎!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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君山楚女
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Joined: 09 Sep 2008
Posts: 333
Location: 湖南雁城［居住南京］
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| Posted: 2009-11-21 21:06:49 Post subject: |
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谢谢白云闲人过奖，我将努力学习。
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-11-21 21:20:31 Post subject: |
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同感！ |
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冰清
同进士出身
Joined: 29 Mar 2007
Posts: 1921
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| Posted: 2009-11-29 13:59:40 Post subject: |
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| 清新、灵动。 |
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