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桂林印象之旅途
南国杜鹃
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PostPosted: 2009-09-23 03:24:05    Post subject: 桂林印象之旅途 Reply with quote

文/南国杜鹃

·······七点
········八点
班机误点
焦灼的目光
不断在矫正着时间的轨迹
你的心、我的心、他的心
早在六点二十五分就准时起飞
夜上海的缤纷灯海
也牵扯不住我们的思绪
我们的思绪就是南飞候鸟
桂林就是我们下一个驿站
桂香正隔着漆黑夜隔着十月
悄然降落在我的词句上
被秋雨打湿的夜
其实可以理解成我们的瞳色
通过另一个角度深入内心

本名:吴祝平,署名:南国杜鹃
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PostPosted: 2009-09-24 14:35:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

创作角度

不错!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-26 17:11:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

桂林还是挺好玩的~~看得出作者心情迫切~~飞机误点真的让人烦的~~

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