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爱上自己(诗小说)
中海
童生


Joined: 07 Jan 2008
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Location: 中国张家港
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PostPosted: 2009-09-24 19:29:55    Post subject: 爱上自己(诗小说) Reply with quote

爱上自己(诗小说)



1
恬庄街幽长,古风高悬
前朝的马蹄声声入耳,声声
都嵌在石缝里,青石板肩并肩
把古河阳码得齐整又平滑
而孙家的宅院身陷秋天
叫朵的女子深闺夜吟
诵出来的诗句寒露重重
这样的夜晚清瘦漫长

2
凿壁借光,我在朵的夜里
影子远离了现在的模样
辫子长,长衫袭,口念华俨
诗句里透着几千年的清高
像新鲜的毒药
迷惑了一个落魄的进士

3
状元台下,赶庙会的人各怀心念
朵三寸金莲,移步而来
轻柔得竟踩痛我的目光
“小姐留步”,我正打开折扇
也打开山水,笼中的鸟飞抵林梢
“公子移驾”,枝头的窠仅一根枯草
河阳山无声无息,一片叶子摇了摇头
我们的目光在香炉前打了一个结

4
爱互生,这个秋天真要果实引领
进香的人再次相遇
今次,你是我永远的痛
不宜占卦的日子,朵在永庆寺抽得下下签
“祸自心起”解签的人口吐血光
我扶着倒下起的私定终身
继续,我的穷困潦倒

5
忧郁是一朵白花
父命难违,朵的发髻束成一团相思
一剪、二剪,秋风阵阵
一片叶子飘过朵的发丝
憔悴而亡的小草,是否灵魂去了远方
流浪的书生去了远方

6
朵,年方二八,欲嫁海
父不应,削发自缢
海榜中,归,得发而泣,草木皆恸
海无心为官,谪,行至墓而滞
朵化烟左右,声自石井,唤之
海抱石而投,井阖而无迹

7
香烟袅袅,前世的朵站在烟里
我亲手点燃的,朵的香
佛说朵一等五百年,苦厄已过
化身男,才貌俱佳。请
好好爱自己
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半溪明月
榜眼


Joined: 30 Sep 2006
Posts: 4760

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PostPosted: 2009-09-24 21:23:58    Post subject: Reply with quote

河阳山无声无息,一片叶子摇了摇头
我们的目光在香炉前打了一个结

凄美的爱情故事~
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赵福治
探花


Joined: 30 May 2006
Posts: 3456
Location: 中国北京
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PostPosted: 2009-09-25 20:09:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

香烟袅袅,前世的朵站在烟里
我亲手点燃的,朵的香
佛说朵一等五百年,苦厄已过
化身男,才貌俱佳。请
好好爱自己
。。美丽的故事。提上。
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安红红
同进士出身


Joined: 07 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-09-26 16:22:13    Post subject: Reply with quote

挺美的故事~~第四段以后可以加上些两个人相爱的情节~~这样后来的殉情就不会太突兀~~~仅作建议~~

问好~
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