田味园隐翁
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 Posted: 2008-05-04 15:08:06 Post subject: 重游陈洲乡 |
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重游旧地把诗题，世事浮云东复西。亲建园亭今胜昔，手栽花木自成蹊。春江明月寻鸥侣，故巷斜阳觅燕泥。二十年来如一梦，人非物异草萋萋。
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松云老人
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| Posted: 2008-05-04 17:22:43 Post subject: |
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| 颈联妙！ |
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是有缘
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| Posted: 2008-05-04 18:28:03 Post subject: |
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有放翁味。
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蜻蜓点水非无意 愁云化雨是有情 |
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心程方伊
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Joined: 14 Sep 2009
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Location: 安庆府桐城县陈洲乡
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| Posted: 2009-09-14 07:11:19 Post subject: |
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 诗名为重游陈洲乡，敢问先生是不是枞阳县陈洲乡，现属汤沟镇。我是陈洲乡人，刘方，请教您的联系方式，有QQ不？我的是402550626。
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野航
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| Posted: 2009-09-15 10:56:43 Post subject: |
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故巷斜阳觅燕泥
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回归自然 回归心灵 回归传统 |
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米运刚
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| Posted: 2009-09-16 00:29:00 Post subject: |
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| “二十年来如一梦”，有同感；“人非物异草萋萋”，必然中的忧伤。“昔”是平声吧？ |
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晓松
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| Posted: 2009-09-16 16:11:28 Post subject: |
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| 旧地重游，感慨颇多，廿年如梦，物异人非。问候田园翁！兼问候松云老人！去年奥运，您大作多多，令人难忘！ |
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秋叶
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| Posted: 2009-09-18 07:50:42 Post subject: |
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| 田味园隐翁 wrote: |
| 重游旧地把诗题，世事浮云东复西。亲建园亭今胜昔，手栽花木自成蹊。春江明月寻鸥侣，故巷斜阳觅燕泥。二十年来如一梦，人非物异草萋萋。 |
好诗，特别是后二联， 另“昔”是入声，不出律。
和一首同题旧作：
七绝－访母校
忆寻往事辨同窗，各历风寒鬓带霜。
三十六年临故地，几多回味几沧桑。
"十"入声 |
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