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排律--长 江 颂
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PostPosted: 2007-02-13 23:51:53    Post subject: 排律--长 江 颂 Reply with quote

排律--长 江 颂
江北川  

不尽江涛滚滚吼,无边景物正悠悠。莲开雪域珠峰洁,浪卷海门旭日鎏。
凤舞神州吟日月,龙腾玉宇绘春秋。巴山蜀水钟灵秀,斗酒千题叠唱酬。
一佛壮严观世界,三苏逸兴傲王侯。宝瓶口聚奇才绩,沙堰飞凝智慧流。
名刹乌尤青江面,古城白帝瞿塘头。天惊石破天关险,地裂浪高地窟泅。
众水一门舟似箭,古猿三峡啸声稠。巫峰神女浮幽梦,楚国昏王入幻逑。
云卷云舒时掩面,霞蒸霞蔚偶回眸。红巾揾净大夫泪,碧血凝成国士忧。
崆岭迂回峡水险,泄滩曲折鬼神啾。长河开阔碧空静,百舸争流天际游。
黄鹤楼头诗韵远,绿鹦洲上笛声幽。高山流水知音在,名曲琴台古树楸。
横槊赋诗邀月舞,纶巾谈笑借风诌。风云赤壁声犹烈,粮草乌林迹尚留。
血肉喧嚣争霸业,波涛寂寞隐蛟虬。乘风抱月长空舞,散发高吟短棹讴。
好雨潇湘千竹翠,春风云梦百花稠。浔阳江上瑟琶语,近月船头芦荻柔。
红烛歌悲弦韵绝,青衫泪湿江州裘。江南戏水莲含靥,李白骑鲸月吐钩。
一醉千年神已爽,今天古国力方遒。和平小试康庄道,发展终成世纪侔。
虎踞城头名胜地,龙盘山势帝王丘。雕栏杰阁宾如织,狮岭华楼主正庥。
远棹神随云水阔,春潮劲涤古今愁。白蛇有意盟情爱,法海无聊结冤仇。
一片痴心瓜渡口,千年绝唱芙蓉楼。春风又绿江南岸,古月无忧不系舟。
万里万年可曾憩,奔流入海得自由。波涛澎湃天连水,海水天连五大洲。
葛坝当先三峡继,彩虹明月不胜收。宜宾美酒流觞久,千载声名岁月遒。
灯火千城观夜景,精神双翅赖谋筹。截流发电新三峡,造福子孙世罕俦。
饮水思源心力聚,龙裔百族志初谋。丹心照彻光辉业,海上明珠射斗牛。

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PostPosted: 2007-02-14 02:51:45    Post subject: Re: 排律--长 江 颂 Reply with quote

律可斟,如:
江北川 wrote:
...浪卷海门旭日鎏...
...地裂浪高地窟泅...

此二句犯孤平。
江北川 wrote:
名刹乌尤青江面,古城白帝瞿塘头。

出句四六不對。瞿字在這裏應該是平聲,對句三平調。
江北川 wrote:
红巾揾净大夫泪,碧血凝成国士忧。

大字拗,對句最好救一下,但國字入聲。
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PostPosted: 2007-02-16 01:01:27    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢你赐教!!!

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