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三个和尚(外2首)
黄淮
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PostPosted: 2010-02-18 23:38:56    Post subject: 三个和尚(外2首) Reply with quote

三个和尚

都因为没有水吃

一个抢走了扁担
到码头去扛脚行

一个夺走了水桶
到集市去买豆浆

一个呆坐在井边
办起了矿泉水厂

都因为没有水吃

门 坎


常常骑着它犹豫
被风吹得打喷嚏

有人在背后一搡
咣当打了个趔趄

刚迈出恨的门坎
又跌进爱的囚室

都是绕不过的
也都能跨过去


我的月亮

――致妻

李白的月亮
――在窗前贴着

苏轼的月亮
――在酒杯举着

我的月亮
――在眼里亮着

银辉万缕
――把我笼罩着
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吴景慧
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PostPosted: 2010-02-18 23:58:08    Post subject: Reply with quote

很有意趣的三首诗,但更喜欢《我的月亮》。向黄老师学习并祝新春吉祥!
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黄淮
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PostPosted: 2010-02-19 00:32:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

黄淮:谢谢——你的鼓励!常来常往——虎年吉祥如意!
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