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六行情诗三首(原创)
慈林
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PostPosted: 2009-09-05 08:50:13    Post subject: 六行情诗三首(原创) Reply with quote

1, 古廊


她轻轻地飘过
幽暗幽曲幽长

阑内竹影如魅
阑外冷月如霜

琴韵来自虚空
渺渺苍苍茫茫


2, 疚


我们分离己久
听说,她重病己久

这天,我突然想她
犹疑中,拨了她的电话

铃响,却是空号
我的泪,潸然而下


3, 惑


春天
使我迷惑


很多.......

却没有一朵
属於我
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PostPosted: 2009-09-05 15:03:24    Post subject: Reply with quote

2, 疚


我们分离己久
听说,她重病己久

这天,我突然想她
犹疑中,拨了她的电话

铃响,却是空号
我的泪,潸然而下

感动!
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PostPosted: 2009-09-07 23:48:43    Post subject: Reply with quote

让人感动的诗,就是好诗.
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