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SEA O SEA

非马
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Posted: 2009-12-07 10:39:08 Post subject: SEA O SEA

SEA O SEA -- slaughtering pilot whales in the Faroe Islands, Denmark calm after carnage the bloody sea finally ceases boiling soon the night curtain will fall to conceal the savage scene letting the glaring red fade into the deep dark corner of unhumankind's memory *The following Website contains related photos: http://teadream.wordpress.com/2008/12/05/demark/ _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

Lake
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Posted: 2009-12-07 23:08:29 Post subject:

Shocking, very powerful imagery. I wouldn't want to be at the scene. I guess it must be a heated issue. Concise and compact as always. Enjoyed. Lake _________________ the trouble with poetry is that it encourages the writing of more poetry -- Billy Collins

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-02-08 20:14:43 Post subject:

尽管我们能读懂，我还是想介绍给不懂英语的更多的读者。试译如下，请非马老师审校。大海啊大海 ——丹麦法罗岛上的屠杀领航鲸事件非马诗周道模译屠戮之后的平静血染的海啊最终停止了沸腾不久夜幕会降下遮掩这残酷的场景使这灼目的血红淡入非人类记忆的幽深的角落 _________________ 诗歌是灵魂的歌唱. 周道模

非马
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Posted: 2010-02-08 21:23:22 Post subject:

不久夜的幕帘就会降下--不久夜幕将会降下是否简洁些? _________________ 欢迎访问<非马艺术世界> http://feima.yidian.org/bmz.htm

William Zhou周道模
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Posted: 2010-02-08 23:41:25 Post subject:

非马 wrote:

不久夜的幕帘就会降下--不久夜幕将会降下
是否简洁些?

我原来想“夜幕”和“夜暮”有点混淆。好，改过来。谢非马老师！
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Posted: 2010-02-17 19:46:24 Post subject:

Lake wrote:

Shocking, very powerful imagery. I wouldn't want to be at the scene. I guess it must be a heated issue. Concise and compact as always.
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同感。问好。
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Posted: 2010-02-17 19:47:44 Post subject:

问好非马老师，感谢周道模先生的译作，让我读懂了这篇诗作。 _________________ syr@shiyanren.com 冷巉湖北省十堰市茅箭区三堰邮政小区48号信箱 442000

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