宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-24 05:16:33 Post subject: 七律•致七夕节 |
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七律•致七夕节
文/宁家珍
天河南北灿星遥,七夕鹊仙铺起桥。
皓月半轮羞脉脉,纤云万朵乐陶陶。
年年织女此时盼,岁岁牛郎彼处瞧。
团聚今宵长昼夜,何须暮暮与朝朝。
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白云闲人 探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007 Posts: 3466
白云闲人Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-25 05:56:43 Post subject: |
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皓月情脉脉,纤云乐淘淘.写出新意.妙! _________________ 诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-29 02:54:23 Post subject: 谢谢欣赏,问候白云闲人诗友。 |
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| 谢谢欣赏,问候白云闲人诗友。 |
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米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-29 04:45:37 Post subject: |
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| 浩月羞脉脉,有新意。可让人作种种设想,皓月为何羞脉脉?问好宁家珍! |
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宁家珍 秀才

Joined: 20 May 2009 Posts: 470 Location: 中国黄山 宁家珍Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-31 02:47:33 Post subject: To 米运刚 |
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| 谢谢米运刚诗友的欣赏,问候。 |
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