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学着写一个~求批~:)
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PostPosted: 2009-08-26 16:17:15    Post subject: 学着写一个~求批~:) Reply with quote

《想开花的花儿》


其实 我早就想开了
还很冷时 我就想求你

一直妒嫉那些个雪儿
梅可以 我凭什么不可以

真的不喜欢
那么多那么浓的艳丽
挤在一起
蒙了眼 谁还知谁在哪里

就让我开吧 我的上帝
一生 我也就开这一次

我会小心翼翼 我很懂事儿


2009/08/26 -于R城
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遛达的七七
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PostPosted: 2009-08-26 20:30:01    Post subject: 你 Reply with quote

你不是在说,夏天唱歌,冬天开花吧!老开什么呀老开?一上来就开得这么好,嫉妒s了!!!

嘿嘿,一一史上之七七第一顶~
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 06:46:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

woaaaaaa 幸福S了~被顶弯了~ shy face
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 07:29:11    Post subject: Reply with quote

花开至心开,开心以至收心。
走文如叶脉伸展中见内情,不错的。
可放在卡片,当一首小情诗。
还真没见过七大小姐顶过谁哦。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 09:16:06    Post subject: 表象與實際 Reply with quote

呵呵,花心其實柔軟懂事ㄦ Cool  
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 14:56:18    Post subject: Reply with quote

博弈 wrote:
花开至心开,开心以至收心。
...

谢过博弈先生~问好~:)
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PostPosted: 2009-08-27 14:57:49    Post subject: Reply with quote

冰夕 wrote:
呵呵,花心其實柔軟懂事ㄦ Cool  

是的 。谢谢冰夕~:)
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