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美丽岛（小的一组，来串门下）

黄靠
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Posted: 2009-08-25 17:29:20 Post subject: 美丽岛（小的一组，来串门下）

◇ 美丽岛世上，是有这么一个小岛的四周，只有水天在天上，也在天下海鸥们饿了也会对着水们发飙世界从来盈余从不圆满天创一半，我们造七分 ◇ 原滩鹅卵石褐色的赭色的白色的黑色的青色的石头们不说话就挤出了那颗透明的长脚的鹤鸟叼回去放草丛中间孵了一整个冬季 ◇ 摆渡人语摆渡一下你就知道这世界，不奇也不妙人来人往普普通通溺水者也多 ◇ 凤凰它来自水上去向火中央 ◇ 起帆卷裤腿的人眼睛里吹进了沙子绳子拉直之后风向就变了独自驾船他不免有些紧张但他仍忍不住乘风起放声歌唱

白水
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Posted: 2009-08-27 04:32:52 Post subject:

楼主好文笔，欢迎常来串门

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-08-27 05:51:25 Post subject:

欢迎黄靠，这样的诗歌读来让人欣喜。推荐！

黄靠
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Posted: 2009-08-27 16:21:27 Post subject:

一直知道这里的起点与想法不错，苦于时间与精力，没法来跟大家交流。谢了明月姐姐。

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