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建军节
孟东还
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 07:56:21    Post subject: 建军节 Reply with quote
夜半谁好登屋顶？停电正宜寻凉风。
一张席儿翻身卧，两只眸子对月明。
最是蛙啼闲不住，偶引三五懒蝉声。
始信风动心未动，壁垒窒热一扫空。
8月1日2点
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笑聊
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PostPosted: 2010-08-01 14:01:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
孟东还 wrote:
夜半谁好登屋顶？停电正宜寻凉风。
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欢迎孟东还新朋友！！！诗与题不切，问好。
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孟东还
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PostPosted: 2010-08-02 06:16:59    Post subject: Reply with quote
笑聊 wrote:
孟东还 wrote:
夜半谁好登屋顶？停电正宜寻凉风。
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欢迎孟东还新朋友！！！诗与题不切，问好。


一，新朋友？--看注册时间，我应该比你还“老”。
二，诗与题不切？---1，8月1号两点所作，不管你认不认同中国人民解放军，八一就是建军节！就时间而言，再“切”不过。至少比现在一坨坨未到七夕就提前操刀牛郎织女天河配的文字够“切”。2，后来月亮也没了，整个就没光了，这一团黑就发生在建军节的凌晨。3，同样是农村，有些地方是不停电的。4，言外之意题外之义不想诗味尽失，不解释！
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