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醉落魄
刘浩明
童生


Joined: 05 Aug 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 02:02:24    Post subject: 醉落魄 Reply with quote

“七夕”感—学步友人韵



七夕是了,

小鹊众志银河渺,

无情马嵬尽凄草。

乐天长歌,

比翼连理好!



月上眉梢稚童闹,

又说七夕回首老。

江月灿灿万年照,

美丽传说—

何人不知晓?
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白云闲人
探花


Joined: 26 Aug 2007
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PostPosted: 2009-08-28 04:48:00    Post subject: Reply with quote

"小鹊众志银河渺",好句!
问好!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山.
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刘浩明
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PostPosted: 2009-09-04 04:40:50    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢白云先生的品评!
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