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诗魂

Helena
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Joined: 19 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2007-01-22 20:22:26 Post subject: 诗魂

诗魂第一次踏入这峦雄奇的山带一点懵懂和一点好奇没想这山里的雾涧边的花还有那林间的珍禽和麋鹿却留下了我的魂第一次浸入这片静美的湖不带犹疑也没环顾四周谁知这湖心的波穿行的鱼还有那浅水的贝壳和湖草却留下了我的诗 _________________ 相信写诗可以让心灵超凡脱俗.

hepingdao
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Joined: 25 May 2006
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Posted: 2007-01-22 21:42:35 Post subject:

欢迎Helena! 还有那林间的珍禽和麋鹿却留下了我的魂仿佛是一次诗心的打开 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

司马策风
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Joined: 03 Dec 2006
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Posted: 2007-01-23 00:00:42 Post subject:

欢迎新朋友。你的诗歌生动流畅。握手问好 _________________ 《北美枫》司马策风文集 http://www.maplereview.org/best.php?t=8676

Helena
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Joined: 19 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2007-01-23 12:39:08 Post subject:

謝謝 _________________ 相信写诗可以让心灵超凡脱俗.

白水
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Joined: 02 Oct 2006
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Posted: 2007-01-23 20:17:49 Post subject:

有好奇就有诗歌. 欢迎新朋友, 问好

杯中冲浪
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Joined: 29 Sep 2006
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Posted: 2007-01-24 06:55:29 Post subject:

清新之感。 _________________ 杯中冲浪.披履而行 http://blog.sina.com.cn/shoutao006

Helena
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Joined: 19 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2007-01-25 19:02:27 Post subject:

谢谢点评。问好Hepingdao, 司马策风，月光，杯中冲浪。 _________________ 相信写诗可以让心灵超凡脱俗.

黄昏雨
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Joined: 17 Jan 2007
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Posted: 2007-01-25 21:36:01 Post subject:

把诗魂二字分别嵌入两节的结尾，可见匠心。问好。 _________________ 手在弦上，心在风中

Helena
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Posted: 2007-01-28 19:39:27 Post subject:

谢黄昏雨阅评。问好! _________________ 相信写诗可以让心灵超凡脱俗.

kokho
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Joined: 30 Nov 2006
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Posted: 2007-01-29 01:39:13 Post subject:

亲新可人的诗歌。。。 _________________ 乒乓、摄影、诗歌

Helena
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Posted: 2007-02-01 12:33:48 Post subject:

谢谢评阅，问好kokho. _________________ 相信写诗可以让心灵超凡脱俗.

kokho
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Posted: 2007-02-12 08:54:51 Post subject:

Helena wrote:

谢谢评阅，问好kokho.

多来坐坐　。。
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