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新詩示範: 让梦醒来　(轉貼)

sfiawong
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Posted: 2009-08-11 02:25:30 Post subject: 新詩示範: 让梦醒来　(轉貼)

让梦醒来　　　文 / 松雪远阳　　落下的雨　　象断了线的珠子　　坠落在八月的大地　　一滴思念的泪　　捉襟见肘　　和着雨滴弹奏　　江南情韵　　　　雨，斜飞着　　落入水中　　浅起　　一朵朵闪亮的雨花　　想你　　我看雨，听雨　　撩开大胆的现实　　走进雨中　　　　我和雨一起　　展开心灵的颤栗　　在小巷上穿行　　等你　　撑来一把晴雨伞　　遮住传统的阴影　　让梦醒来註:- 這是一首很不錯的新詩,採用新詞入詩,是很合格的方式,作為新詩的示範也頂適合的. _________________ 有評必回應. Love your relatives and friends when they are near you. 我的英文詩: http://poemhunter.com/albert-wong http://facebook.com/sfiawong

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