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别逼我(四首)
后现代刀子
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Joined: 21 Feb 2009
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 13:40:57    Post subject: 别逼我(四首) Reply with quote

别逼我!再逼我
我就把整个夏天都翻过来
倒掉。
谁让你们弄丢了我的21岁
一如去年,你也
输光了我的
20岁

——题记

1

拔地而起的万家灯火,让我
更黑了
一个人走在十字路口,分不清
向左还是向右?
刚要踮起目光,躲开
瓢泼的冷
猝不及防,一柄陡峭的风
斜劈下来
红!新鲜的横切面
该撒一把盐,还是
忧伤



2

晴。我把渐渐变质的眼神
晾在阳台上
一直被锁在抽屉里,磨
去了棱角。以致钝化、生锈
以致拿出,成为瘫痪的软
面对坚硬的生活
只一下、便
碰去了
光芒


3

阴。每次这样的天气
我都咀嚼到雨的味道
果然,一个洗手盆从天空
倒掉。
这样的神机妙算持续了
三天。第四天
我张开嘴巴准备说话,却
吐出一块绿色
原来,心情潮湿得
连喉咙
也长满小草



4

当初是背着井离开的家乡,可
每晚都口渴
吃梨。只能让胃部保持湿润
直到昨天晚上
坐在沙发上读报,一篇
描写淄博的散文映入眼帘
坏了!它被我一头攮进
看到刚出炉的夜色,也不管
烫还是不烫
饮。让它把整个心脏
灌穿
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白水
大学士


Joined: 02 Oct 2006
Posts: 14102
Location: TORONTO
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 15:51:56    Post subject: Reply with quote

有个性 Very Happy
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杯中冲浪
进士出身


Joined: 29 Sep 2006
Posts: 2891
Location: 中国
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PostPosted: 2009-08-12 02:46:39    Post subject: Reply with quote

个别词语只注意语言的炫丽,却失去了意象和逻辑。
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上城
进士出身


Joined: 15 Mar 2007
Posts: 2024
Location: 江夏黄鹤楼
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PostPosted: 2009-08-12 17:49:04    Post subject: Reply with quote

别逼我!再逼我
我就把整个夏天都翻过来
倒掉。
谁让你们弄丢了我的21岁
一如去年,你也
输光了我的
20岁

——题记


这题记比诗好
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每个诗人都很重要
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