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<<薄荷香之夜>>

烟Eva
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Posted: 2009-07-31 22:33:50 Post subject: <<薄荷香之夜>>

<<薄荷香之夜>> 文/曼陀林 a 冉很想舍弃夜晚夜晚的彩灯总是扩散更多的水纹冉不小心会沉下去 b 比如现在冉就彻底卡在角落的卡座上小口啜着冷饮香蕉水果船浮在桌面整装待发冉离门口仅百步之遥却没有人走向冉冉的眼里蓄满泪水一次次回旋着抱紧理查德散落的钢琴片段 c 外滩的风很大冉趄趔了一下潮水把月光涌近又推远依偎的情侣星星一样遍布冉的眼角又燃起渔火依稀一只手扶过来冉闻到了薄荷香的味道它可疑地类似古龙水的清凉二00九年八月一日于广东中山作者简介：　　　刘国秀,女,湖北赤壁人,曾用名:非洲客,烟Eva,曼陀林,烟曼陀林,蓝烟,中国网络作家协会会员,(2009年6月21日加入,编号:200900163),88年开始写作.有文字发表在<<深圳人>>,<<楚南文学>>,<<福建泉州报>>,<<九月诗刊>>,<<天下诗歌>>,<<新诗大观>>,<<无界诗歌>>,<<网文荟萃>>,<<枫香诗刊>>,<<枫香文学>>等官民纸刊,期间辍笔十多年. 现在在<<诗选刊论坛>>,<<情诗论坛>>,<<九月诗刊论坛>>,<<后汉诗论坛>>,<<新启蒙论坛>>,<<天下诗歌论坛>>等十个论坛任诗歌版版主或编辑. 我的博客: http://blog.sina.com.cn/yanmdeboke　　通讯地址：广东中山市小榄镇九洲基松柏路56号. (合丰市场对面) 刘国秀电话:13432181614.QQ:553154264 电子信箱:553154264@qq.com _________________ 那丝丝缕缕的那飘飘缈缈的那美到极致的那余韵悠长的。。。。。。我的博客: http://blog.sina.com.cn/yanmdeboke

安红红
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Posted: 2009-07-31 23:39:33 Post subject:

精致的忧伤~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

半溪明月
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Posted: 2009-08-03 22:02:06 Post subject:

情境的描述很好，感觉结束的仓促了~问好烟！多来啊！

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Posted: 2009-08-04 12:42:54 Post subject:

凄美, 柔情

江南雨
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Posted: 2009-08-07 22:33:00 Post subject:

精致的忧伤~ 问好~ _________________ 陕西姜华

烟Eva
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Posted: 2009-08-11 04:06:53 Post subject:

安红红 wrote:

精致的忧伤~
问好~

谢谢来读.问好安红红.
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那丝丝缕缕的那飘飘缈缈的那美到极致的那余韵悠长的。。。。。。
我的博客: http://blog.sina.com.cn/yanmdeboke

烟Eva
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Posted: 2009-08-11 04:08:08 Post subject:

半溪明月 wrote:

情境的描述很好，感觉结束的仓促了~问好烟！多来啊！

握握明月,我想诗应该留下空间,不需要太长.
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那丝丝缕缕的那飘飘缈缈的那美到极致的那余韵悠长的。。。。。。
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烟Eva
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Posted: 2009-08-11 04:09:09 Post subject:

白水 Moonlight wrote:

凄美, 柔情

谢谢来读.问好白水.
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那丝丝缕缕的那飘飘缈缈的那美到极致的那余韵悠长的。。。。。。
我的博客: http://blog.sina.com.cn/yanmdeboke

烟Eva
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Posted: 2009-08-11 04:10:12 Post subject:

江南雨 wrote:

精致的忧伤~
问好~

谢谢来读.握姜华.
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那丝丝缕缕的那飘飘缈缈的那美到极致的那余韵悠长的。。。。。。
我的博客: http://blog.sina.com.cn/yanmdeboke

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