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浣溪沙·日全食
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PostPosted: 2009-07-23 20:57:38    Post subject: 浣溪沙·日全食 Reply with quote
浣溪沙·日全食
文/宁家珍（斜阳）

美丽钻环天宇横，
骤然黑暗夺光明。
绝伦表演瞬间呈。

玉兔飞奔来会友，
金乌跨步把宾迎。
何时此景复重生？

（平水韵）
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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 02:44:51    Post subject: Reply with quote
玉兔飞奔来会友，
金乌跨步把宾迎。
何时此景复重生？

五百年后呗！
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过尽晴川与雾海，未遭奇变是真人。
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PostPosted: 2009-07-27 14:54:15    Post subject: Reply with quote
有韵味。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 00:10:28    Post subject: Reply with quote
玉兔金乌能会友？诗人妙笔趣横生。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 01:57:33    Post subject: Reply with quote
胡恢宗 wrote:
玉兔金乌能会友？诗人妙笔趣横生。


日月尚能为友相会，人类何故自己相残？
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PostPosted: 2009-08-09 03:26:01    Post subject: To qinghongh Reply with quote
谢谢qinghongh的赞同。问候诗友。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-10 04:20:44    Post subject: Reply with quote
活灵活現,趣意横生!
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PostPosted: 2009-08-11 03:10:12    Post subject: To 白云闲人 Reply with quote
谢谢白云闲人先生品读。问候诗友。
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