米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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 Posted: 2009-08-01 16:48:15 Post subject: 暑日还留三溪寺 |
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暑日还留三溪寺
清溪绕古刹，淡雾拂微尘。般若钟声远，弥陀鼓语沉。
听松无妄念，抚弦有诚心。借得三分静，案头笔迹馨。 |
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黄洋界
探花
Joined: 23 Mar 2007
Posts: 3301
Location: 多伦多,加拿大
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| Posted: 2009-08-01 17:15:47 Post subject: |
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心静诗清.欣赏!
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喜金石书画，友竹菊梅兰 |
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白云闲人
探花
Joined: 26 Aug 2007
Posts: 3466
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| Posted: 2009-08-02 04:48:54 Post subject: |
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"般若钟声远,弥陀鼓语沉" --- 精! 妙!
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诗中岁月,
笛里关山. |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
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| Posted: 2009-08-02 20:13:44 Post subject: |
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| 诚谢黄、白云二先生阅读点评。 |
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孟东还
童生
Joined: 14 May 2007
Posts: 47
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| Posted: 2009-08-03 19:06:06 Post subject: |
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“淡雾拂微尘”---拂似不妥，挟如何？
“听松无妄念，抚弦有诚心。”-----不解作者是一般禅友还是佛居士什么的？太“着于相”，“抚弦有诚心”极不自然，这“弦”“诚心”抚得吃力。也不知是古琴还是吉它之弦，也许作者目中无弦，而弦已在胸，只是心弦而已？！暂且我是谬解为作者在虔诚地向大自然或“佛”倾诉...... |
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qinghongh
榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007
Posts: 4110
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| Posted: 2009-08-04 06:18:51 Post subject: |
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| 米兄诗有禅意。 |
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米运刚
秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009
Posts: 918
Location: 四川省德阳市
米运刚Collection |
| Posted: 2009-08-04 16:02:06 Post subject: |
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| 谢谢孟兄批评，谢谢二兄阅读。 |
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