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你还好吗?
红袖添乱
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PostPosted: 2009-08-03 07:21:17    Post subject: 你还好吗? Reply with quote



当一个人
爱过,痛过,挣扎过
踏万水千山苦苦寻来
眼神热烈 又寂寞,问:
你还好吗?
请你一定
认真地,诚实地告诉他:
我很好!或者
我不好!

不过,无论你选择怎样的回答
此时他的心都已经
毫无选择地碎了。。。

所以我没有勇气跑去问
你还好吗?
因为我承受不起任何一种回答

于是,我自暴自弃
每当喉咙哽塞
思念澎湃难息
会去一个寂寥的湖边
轻声地,一遍又一遍地问
你还好吗?
你还好吗?
。。。

不是试图呼唤
只是想让清幽的回声
苍凉地追逐
飞翔的野鹤
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2009-08-04 02:08:06    Post subject: Reply with quote

悔恨交加后的彻底忏悔!
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苏茉儿
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 07:38:22    Post subject: Reply with quote

结尾很见心境。。。喜欢。
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默默无言处,盈盈一笑间。
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PostPosted: 2009-08-05 18:01:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

画美、诗美、人美

情景交融。富有诗情画意
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詩盜喜裸評
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PostPosted: 2009-08-08 21:02:34    Post subject: 别捧她,生气呢! Reply with quote

上城 wrote:
画美、诗美、人美

情景交融。富有诗情画意

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是有缘
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PostPosted: 2009-08-13 15:32:44    Post subject: Reply with quote

好象似曾相识的绿水
仿佛从未改变的青山
自由的鸟儿
飞翔在悠悠的天地间

常常是一群
偶尔也孤单
成双成对的时候
比翼双飞的梦好象一幅画呈现在眼前

风瑟瑟地潇洒
树孤独地守候在河边
风来兴的时候
变黄的红叶感动地落下一片片

山水依然
白云躲着不肯见面
春去秋往
明年的桃花该开出怎样一分灿烂
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