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酒店里的落地窗帘 80后诗歌

董喜阳
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Posted: 2009-08-04 01:15:36 Post subject: 酒店里的落地窗帘 80后诗歌

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杨海军
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Posted: 2009-08-04 10:24:50 Post subject:

不错的诗。努力做吧！！ _________________ 走了很久了。还清晰地望见/身后那盏明灭的灯火/好像我们走的越久越远/故乡的那盏灯就越亮 ——拙作《离开村庄》 http://blog.sina.com.cn/u/1269376751

董喜阳
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Posted: 2009-08-04 16:32:07 Post subject:

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