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七十二行人物素描（长诗）

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Posted: 2009-04-10 03:34:30 Post subject: 七十二行人物素描（长诗）

诗人（01）清贫如洗却高昂着头两袖空空怀藏整个宇宙不记得晨昏霞露一心与时间竞走在母亲五线谱似的皱纹里用妻子的泪做墨放牧意念的歌喉曾把思想在春天撒播也把眼中的血丝丰收不知谁是第二个儿子的明天能否站立在汹涌的潮头

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Posted: 2009-04-10 04:04:56 Post subject:

两袖空空怀藏整个宇宙诗人志高欢迎天威 _________________ 为网友服务: 端茶倒水勤打扫!

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Posted: 2009-04-10 18:01:00 Post subject:

在母亲五线谱似的皱纹里用妻子的泪做墨放牧意念的歌喉用妻子的欢笑做墨吧, 让她和你的母亲因为你成为世界上最幸福的人. 祝好

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Posted: 2009-04-11 16:33:30 Post subject:

谢谢二位的赏读!

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Posted: 2009-04-11 17:33:16 Post subject:

七十二行, 看来诗人是第一不好的行业。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-04-12 23:46:21 Post subject:

最辛苦的是诗人。

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Posted: 2009-04-16 01:03:14 Post subject:

泥瓦匠（02）手茧长成了大厦额皱集成了楼群脚上仍踩着泥浆灶下的薪火点燃早晨的希望熄灭黄昏的霞光日复一日甘河不闻不问地与白天一同流淌

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Posted: 2009-04-16 01:14:30 Post subject:

诗人和泥瓦匠多有相仿。收入类似。交税不多。文字泥土，都是盖楼。楼越高，越不安全。 _________________ I'm nobody! Who are you?

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Posted: 2009-04-21 02:35:03 Post subject:

谢谢解析！

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Posted: 2009-04-21 02:37:05 Post subject:

三轮车夫（03）双脚踏动时间的圆轮心情亦如车轮一样滚动早霞的希望在一天的汗水里潜泳那劳累的筋骨却无法找到靠岸的码头

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Posted: 2009-04-21 16:40:42 Post subject:

三轮车夫也类似额~ 这个排序挺有意思~ 问好~ _________________ 如果不开始，会失去过程。 QQ：3972083 微信：qisebaihuayuan

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Posted: 2009-04-30 17:52:09 Post subject:

多谢安红红赏读！

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Posted: 2009-04-30 17:53:52 Post subject:

脚夫（04）有的曾以锄为笔在田垅上做过画把心情梳理成秋的丰收而今白天的闲散也不愿在火炕上等待肩上的扁担挑上的绳索奔向城里忙碌的火车站前给人提包出卖力气和双肩微笑的深层里用他们的话说 “舒坦” 而带给疲劳的旅客却是橘黄色的安全

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Posted: 2009-05-01 14:31:31 Post subject:

很好的墨着点。提

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Posted: 2009-06-02 00:08:59 Post subject:

谢谢支持！

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Posted: 2009-06-02 04:22:12 Post subject:

天风神威 wrote:

诗人
...

誰叫你入行?
未成名前誰會知?
人家問你盛行,
如何答?你會說我是詩人?
辛苦了大詩人,
但詩人的你,
志氣比天高.努力以赴吧,
我會支持你呀!
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Posted: 2009-06-02 13:40:17 Post subject:

神威大哥也过来这里了！欢迎常来！！

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Posted: 2009-06-02 22:36:06 Post subject:

天风神威 wrote:

泥瓦匠
...

頂有意思的工作
脚上
仍踩着泥浆
灶下的薪火
点燃早晨的希望

真的靠您了
你給人們實現希望
靠了你雙手

怎可沒您的幫忙
助人為快樂之本
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Posted: 2009-06-05 00:44:02 Post subject:

子花 wrote:

神威大哥也过来这里了！欢迎常来！！

握手子花！

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Posted: 2009-06-05 00:45:37 Post subject:

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天风神威 wrote:

诗人
...

誰叫你入行?
...

谢谢你的赏读！更希望你经常支持！

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