孟东还 童生
Joined: 14 May 2007 Posts: 47
孟东还Collection |
Posted: 2009-07-29 07:14:33 Post subject: 流矢 |
|
|
忽疑凝眸初相识,即丘比特发箭时。
箭御流光犹含醉,心荡春风尽成痴。
癫狂十岁天涯梦,一笑如常明月诗。
纵许此生犹余恨,镞不利兮准颇失! |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-04 16:13:32 Post subject: |
|
|
孟兄尽得其中味,“心荡春风尽成痴。” |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
369913806 童生
Joined: 30 Jul 2009 Posts: 40
369913806Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-04 23:06:54 Post subject: |
|
|
好一个 癫狂十岁天涯梦,一笑如常明月诗。拜读了! |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
孟东还 童生
Joined: 14 May 2007 Posts: 47
孟东还Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-18 17:13:21 Post subject: |
|
|
米运刚 wrote: |
孟兄尽得其中味,“心荡春风尽成痴。” |
可恨爱神近视眼,懵懂一箭射略偏。 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
孟东还 童生
Joined: 14 May 2007 Posts: 47
孟东还Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-18 17:27:31 Post subject: |
|
|
369913806 wrote: |
好一个 癫狂十岁天涯梦,一笑如常明月诗。拜读了! |
当时感怀唯觉痛,,而今写来只是轻。 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
米运刚 秀才
Joined: 19 Mar 2009 Posts: 918 Location: 四川省德阳市 米运刚Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-19 02:08:39 Post subject: |
|
|
不怨青光不怨莺,香魂缕缕系伴湘君。爱神早发丘比箭,滴水自会融寒冰。 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
qinghongh 榜眼
Joined: 14 Oct 2007 Posts: 4110
qinghonghCollection |
Posted: 2009-08-19 06:07:24 Post subject: |
|
|
若有情,还需缘。 |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
孟东还 童生
Joined: 14 May 2007 Posts: 47
孟东还Collection |
Posted: 2009-08-21 21:33:45 Post subject: |
|
|
米运刚 wrote: |
不怨青光不怨莺,香魂缕缕系伴湘君。爱神早发丘比箭,滴水自会融寒冰。 |
信手曲传诗中意,一语关怀倍觉温。
米兄热心人也! |
|
Back to top |
|
 |
 |
 |
|