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蝶恋花·夜思
荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 04:02:54    Post subject: 蝶恋花·夜思 Reply with quote
梦影凄清思缱绻，
半树含苞，
雨打千千遍。
正喜春来春又远，
凄凄切切肝肠断。


顾盼春归空挂恋，
漫笑多情，
自古多愁怨。
枉负月华传夙愿，
望穿秋水无人念。
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 04:35:17    Post subject: Reply with quote
WOW, 感人. 可参赛了.

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荷梦
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PostPosted: 2007-09-10 05:03:25    Post subject: Re: 蝶恋花·夜思 Reply with quote
谢谢！只是，我这里面“春” 字出现很多次呢！Embarassed
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PostPosted: 2007-09-12 18:18:00    Post subject: Reply with quote
不光春多，多也多了点，不过还好，不嫌多。叠字用的恰到好处。学习了！
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PostPosted: 2007-10-12 22:19:26    Post subject: Reply with quote
晓松 wrote:
不光春多，多也多了点，不过还好，不嫌多。叠字用的恰到好处。学习了！

谢谢评点！！
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PostPosted: 2009-08-07 04:13:37    Post subject: Reply with quote
喜欢。
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