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假如
江小鸟
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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 06:17:56    Post subject: 假如 Reply with quote

假如……



假如有一只蜜蜂

在你耳边嗡嗡地叫

你不要讨厌—把它赶走

也许它受了我的委托

向你诉说什么……



假如有一只小鸟

大清早把你叫醒

你不要烦躁,不要骂它

也许它受了我的委托

为你唱一支歌……



假如你站在轮船的舱口

海浪呼唤着向你涌来

你不要惊悸,不要躲藏

滚滚波涛是我胸中的激情

每一个浪头都向你问候……



假如夜里有一对星星

呆呆地望着你不眨眼睛

你不要低头,不要心跳

你应当同样深情地望着它

就像默默相对时望着我……



假如你的耳根发烧

那是我的思念向你传导

你不必在意,不必发愁

你应立即拿起电话

点击我的telephone number

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hepingdao
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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 07:51:36    Post subject: Reply with quote

抒情得可爱
Very Happy

经典而又不俗套的感觉
Cool
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风动
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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 15:47:42    Post subject: Reply with quote

深情而明净。欣赏了。
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杯中冲浪
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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 17:01:12    Post subject: Reply with quote

这种传统的样式其实很难写。
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司马策风
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PostPosted: 2007-02-10 22:08:46    Post subject: Reply with quote

优美 而 抒情, 缠绵不失潇洒。

握手欢迎
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