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<<那一页狂草>>
湮雨朦朦
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PostPosted: 2009-07-17 18:22:27    Post subject: <<那一页狂草>> Reply with quote

1.<<那一页狂草>>

青 越过蓝
水漫步水经注 行走了千年的路
一瓶黄河上游的墨 倒在春秋或是
论语 深情而又辽阔
是天空 明媚着草的内心
横竖翻滚着流云的痕迹 雨里的荷晶莹着
藕的泪滴 红的 黑的
将在浪花之间越过黎明 麦尖一转身
另一条江在梧桐里湿润
你 愤笔疾书着
熟透的峡谷 收集了发黄的叶
悄然锁上一只露珠
小溪 在狂草里嘶鸣
无与伦比

2.<<享用一只提拉米苏>>

在比咖啡还浓的情绪里穿行 半只杏
嘴唇 或是眼睛 珍藏着
一马平川的麦子在秋后的别离
尘土飞扬 闹市的白糖
地窖清瘦的几捆甘蔗 是冬天渐行渐远的甜味剂
天鹅绒袜 此时在凉席上打滑
葫芦垂吊起桃圆里的童话 心事
哽咽着 一只提拉米苏
牵引着流离失所的瓦蓝
南下的风 衔着彩云的温柔
走进九月
像一记重扣
儿时的魔界 丢了
一只魔方

3.<<风不能吹走青苔>>

风还在 清晨的脸好像随时
会变得更暗 我找寻着早起的青苔
一只黑蚂蚱受了惊吓 跳跃着
曾经五颜六色的山 此时成熟的绿
坦荡 安祥

草采撷起香气 青苔隐藏着它们的影子
小路和植物
在新鲜里点头致意 一方红格头巾
吹乱了春意
桃木椅和别离
流行着雕刻的 摇曳的远古情绪
拂着青苔的风掠过二十世纪

4.<<水缸 或者流浪>>

只是说 葫芦承载起乡音的困惑
一根扁担就抗起了黎明
遗失的稻穗 咕咕地水声
滂沱着 田鸡啄食着黄昏 玉米杆弯着腰
琢磨起北方的小调 一只少女的风筝正在梳妆
桃木梳只剩下三分之二 古朴的流苏遗憾着
箱底的高龄旗袍 "噹'的一声
水缸荡漾着牧童悠远的笑 一双小脚
在春光里飞跑 流浪的村落之上
宁静的瓦 没有雪花
挑起一泉的水
浪潮
开始逃亡
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PostPosted: 2009-07-17 23:12:07    Post subject: Reply with quote

诗歌不要引入太多的意象~~会把诗的主题埋得看不清~~

想象力丰富~~

问好~~
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