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思念(答好友书)
无仑
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PostPosted: 2007-02-08 08:08:08    Post subject: 思念(答好友书) Reply with quote

一滴水,或是一滴泪
在手心里摊开,飘落成花雨

无声的锤,或是滚动的屏
删改了记忆,一串沉重的问挂在来路

默默地问,无声地答
在一阵风掠过一片叶子的时候
哭成一夜诗行

今天睡在昨天的梦里长出的疤
伤了明天的风景和一只归巢的雁

说声抱歉,熬了一夜,等了一冬
为的是把余下的泪一并流出

刷新来世的泪,重复以往的夜
善良编织成祝福,咀嚼文字绽放一生的笑

期待春的思念,一声召唤
便将全部的爱恨清空,监守
一弯明月,洒一衢暖冬的思恋
构建冥冥中的默契,将一颗心擦亮,擦亮
无仑.2007.2.8.北京
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PostPosted: 2007-02-08 08:14:10    Post subject: Reply with quote

思念很沉重呀

无声的锤,或是滚动的屏
删改了记忆,一串沉重的问挂在来路
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PostPosted: 2007-02-08 18:41:32    Post subject: Reply with quote

一滴水,或是一滴泪
在手心里摊开,飘落成花雨 。。。。。。诗意悠远。
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PostPosted: 2007-02-09 00:44:33    Post subject: Reply with quote

语言精练,意象优美。有哲理,耐咀嚼。

欣赏“默默地问,无声地答
在一阵风掠过一片叶子的时候
哭成一夜诗行 ”

以及“今天睡在昨天的梦里长出的疤
伤了明天的风景和一只归巢的雁 ”

等句子。


握手问好
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PostPosted: 2007-02-09 01:56:14    Post subject: Reply with quote

谢谢hepingdao赵福治司马策风!感谢支持!
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